In celebration, I thought I'd share a couple of my own haiku style poems, both of which were inspired by listening to the ocean at different times (though, I'm not sure why I'm bothering to say so, since you'd have easily figured that out by reading them).
Anyway...
This first one I wrote last year:
Sea birds call
Foamy waves crash
Cold wind howls
© 2015
And this one I wrote more recently:
Youngsters laugh and play,
Splashing in the chilly sea,
Making watchers smile.
© 2016
6 comments:
Both your haikus capture the mood and energy of the sea. They "take you there." Very nice!
Thanks, Jeanie! :)
Both are very good. I agree with Jeannie--they capture being at the sea. :)
Thanks, Rita! :)
I agree! These are really good!
Iggy:
Thanks... Glad you enjoyed them!
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